Help Me Improve

Chapter eleven of Still the Same is currently in the drafting process. As well as several more updates, Worth the Kill chapter six, Wings of a Worthless God chapter six, The Bridge Between Land and Sea chapter two and a whole new Dirk Jake AU are on the horizon!

What I would like to know, if it's not too much trouble, would be what everyone thinks of my writing thus far. I'm highly interested in seeing what is working for people and what isn't. Stylistic things, goofy things, and stuff that didn't make a damn bit of sense.

Since these next updates are getting plot heavy, especially Still the Same, I want to make sure that I'm moving forward in a way that is beneficial not only to me, but you guys the readers as well.

SO. If there's anything that you think I did well on, or something I did not, please comment here on this journal, or find the chapter and point it out there. I'd like to fix things that bother people if it turns out to be a majority before I commit to several twenty or thirty page drafts to upload.

If you do not feel like giving me a public crit then feel free to note me as well.

PS: if you pick my 30 min challenges or some of the silly one shot holiday fics, please note that those aren't my usual quality. However, if those types of stories had an element you enjoyed, please do tell me.